alextheDJ! wassup?
Slow start, liking it though. Piano, that is a nice touch. Everything seems to go together, but it is just taking to long to build. ahh! here is the beat. it is a little generic. Now the ghostly sounds from the beginning are gone, im at 1:46. Nice synth at 1:50, but it is a little generic itself. Now the song is getting a bit repetitivie. The bass is starting to hurt my ears a bit, but my volume might just be too loud. Now it is only piano and it is getting filtered a lot. that doesn't seem necessary. And were back with the same beat, but a new synth. sounds like laughter at 3:48, which sounds nice. this song is just a little to repetitive.
Long song, but it sounds cool.
well here is the break Down:
You got talent, you just need to work on organizing it and not trying to over play it. There is a good song with this idea here, it is just stretched out to 4:37 when it could be a lot better somewhere around 2 minutes. Listen to professional music a bit more, take note of how they use teh same mechanics you have just in ways to compliment each other. 1 point for sounds, 2 points for bass, 1 point for instruments well used, 2 points for beat. and 3 points for synths. but this is deathly repetitive, i have to take off 4 points for that.
Good effort, just needs more structuring. you can do it!