nice one
around 0:30 i heard a variant! i can tell you have your main 3 chords but im really happy to hear that you deviated from them every now and then, really gave the song that extra touch that only someone with a good set of ears could have.
you say you can't organize your songs but you have some ears on you! i'd say keep that up! develop the talent you have and make some great songs dood!
but this song clipped a lot. so it's not solid yet, but it's really close to being a good solid song!